Related Clues:

• Cut some lines reflecting a concern for The Seafarer by Ezra Pound around the edges
• Checked rising water level -- dredge in middle
• Reworded, perhaps
• Worked for Money, say
• Cut down?
• Revised copy
• Polished, as a paper
• Changed the language of?
• Blue-pencilled
• Improved a manuscript or novel
• Minced words, say
• Enjoyed Independent: emerged with no content corrected
• Cut short, perhaps
• Improved, hopefully
• Not the same computers carried by men?